First jersey attempt
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Zoom123 |
Posted on 19-05-2012 08:09
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Hi everyone!
This is my first ever attempt at a jersey so I would love some constructive criticism and all that stuff I know it is very basic!
Thanks!
Edited by Zoom123 on 25-05-2012 23:26
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Teddy The Creator |
Posted on 19-05-2012 08:43
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For a first try that's really nice! Those red shapes seem to be on top of the plis which doesn't make much sense, but otherwise looks great.
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Zoom123 |
Posted on 19-05-2012 08:46
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Teddy The Creator wrote:
For a first try that's really nice! Those red shapes seem to be on top of the plis which doesn't make much sense, but otherwise looks great.
Yeah I just coloured it all red because I wasn't sure what would show and what wouldn't. Thanks for the comment though
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Posted on 19-05-2012 08:52
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Looks really nice. |
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Teddy The Creator |
Posted on 19-05-2012 08:56
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Zoom123 wrote:
Teddy The Creator wrote:
For a first try that's really nice! Those red shapes seem to be on top of the plis which doesn't make much sense, but otherwise looks great.
Yeah I just coloured it all red because I wasn't sure what would show and what wouldn't. Thanks for the comment though
That's not what I meant. You know what a plis is? It's the white thing you put on top of the design to make it look real.
You put the shapes over the plis, when everything should be underneath it...
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Zoom123 |
Posted on 19-05-2012 08:57
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Teddy The Creator wrote:
Zoom123 wrote:
Teddy The Creator wrote:
For a first try that's really nice! Those red shapes seem to be on top of the plis which doesn't make much sense, but otherwise looks great.
Yeah I just coloured it all red because I wasn't sure what would show and what wouldn't. Thanks for the comment though
That's not what I meant. You know what a plis is? It's the white thing you put on top of the design to make it look real.
You put the shapes over the plis, when everything should be underneath it...
Oh ok... I'm still not sure if I understand or not
Edited by Zoom123 on 19-05-2012 08:58
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Posted on 19-05-2012 13:24
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Zoom123 wrote:
Teddy The Creator wrote:
Zoom123 wrote:
Teddy The Creator wrote:
For a first try that's really nice! Those red shapes seem to be on top of the plis which doesn't make much sense, but otherwise looks great.
Yeah I just coloured it all red because I wasn't sure what would show and what wouldn't. Thanks for the comment though
That's not what I meant. You know what a plis is? It's the white thing you put on top of the design to make it look real.
You put the shapes over the plis, when everything should be underneath it...
Oh ok... I'm still not sure if I understand or not
The white background layer that has the jersey texture on it -known as the plis- , should be the topmost layer, with a 'multiply' effect on it, so that the texture is applied to all layers underneath. You seem to have done that for the logos, but the red shapes that make up your design seem to be placed on top of it, rather than beneath. If you're using Gimp or PS, just rearrange the layers, and it should be fine.
Also, does this mean you don't want me to make your request?
[url=https://pcmdaily.com/messages.php?msg_send=19438]-Requests for Man-Game 2014 jerseys are OPEN!
Click to request!-[/url]
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Zoom123 |
Posted on 19-05-2012 13:32
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ANFreeman wrote:
Zoom123 wrote:
Teddy The Creator wrote:
Zoom123 wrote:
Teddy The Creator wrote:
For a first try that's really nice! Those red shapes seem to be on top of the plis which doesn't make much sense, but otherwise looks great.
Yeah I just coloured it all red because I wasn't sure what would show and what wouldn't. Thanks for the comment though
That's not what I meant. You know what a plis is? It's the white thing you put on top of the design to make it look real.
You put the shapes over the plis, when everything should be underneath it...
Oh ok... I'm still not sure if I understand or not
The white background layer that has the jersey texture on it -known as the plis- , should be the topmost layer, with a 'multiply' effect on it, so that the texture is applied to all layers underneath. You seem to have done that for the logos, but the red shapes that make up your design seem to be placed on top of it, rather than beneath. If you're using Gimp or PS, just rearrange the layers, and it should be fine.
Also, does this mean you don't want me to make your request?
Yeah I understand now Thanks! There is not much point of making a jersey for me now ..Well unless you really want too. But I guess you could spend that time doing something more important.
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Posted on 19-05-2012 13:39
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As a first attempt it looks really good, but given time you will get better and improve your efforts |
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Zoom123 |
Posted on 19-05-2012 13:45
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sutty68 wrote:
As a first attempt it looks really good, but given time you will get better and improve your efforts
Thanks sutty. I hope I improve
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Zoom123 |
Posted on 19-05-2012 13:47
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O.K ... I'm making another one right now. It is going to be a bit of a different design but with all of the advice I have received it should be better Thanks to everyone that has given advice It really helps
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Zoom123 |
Posted on 19-05-2012 14:29
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Ok. New jersey is done and I'm about to upload it
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Zoom123 |
Posted on 19-05-2012 14:33
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I think that this one is much better - I mean quality wise...
and the mini -
Enjoy!
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lluuiiggii |
Posted on 19-05-2012 16:48
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The Holden on the back won't appear (race number above it) and the Westpack W on the back will probably be too big. But other than that, it looks very nice (the shapes are really smooth)
Btw, always upload jerseys in .png, they lose a lot of quality in .jpg
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Zoom123 |
Posted on 19-05-2012 23:56
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lluuiiggii wrote:
The Holden on the back won't appear (race number above it) and the Westpack W on the back will probably be too big. But other than that, it looks very nice (the shapes are really smooth)
Btw, always upload jerseys in .png, they lose a lot of quality in .jpg
Got it , Thanks
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Zoom123 |
Posted on 20-05-2012 02:01
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Ok..I've attempted another jersey here.. It is not Holden - Westpac. I know that it is extremely basic but I'm still trying to find my feet
Mini -
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Posted on 20-05-2012 02:07
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Front of eBay Jersey on rider -
Back of eBay jersey on rider -
Edited by Zoom123 on 20-05-2012 02:09
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Zoom123 |
Posted on 20-05-2012 03:24
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I'm really enjoying making my own fantasy jerseys at the moment so I made another one -
Mini -
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Zoom123 |
Posted on 20-05-2012 03:31
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Front of Ford - Intel jersey on rider -
Back of Ford - Intel jersey on rider -
Edited by Zoom123 on 20-05-2012 03:34
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lluuiiggii |
Posted on 20-05-2012 03:34
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Nice job again but apparently you've used a double plis on this one. And you're still using .jpg
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