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Jakstar22 |
Posted on 14-01-2013 08:23
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Miguel98 wrote:
Good jersey there Jakstar.
Thanks Miguel.
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Jesleyh |
Posted on 15-01-2013 15:38
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Yeah, I like the showroom, it contains some nice jerseys...
Oh, and, especially like the Christmas one of course
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PCMdaily Awards: 12x nomination, 9x runner-up, 0x win.
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sutty68 |
Posted on 15-01-2013 15:45
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The showroom is filling up nicely, keep up the good work |
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Jakstar22 |
Posted on 15-01-2013 22:41
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Thanks guys. I haven't gotten around to putting the NC jerseys in there yet but I will get them in as soon as possible.
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fcancellara |
Posted on 15-01-2013 22:57
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Mhm... I don't like it, I think you didn't spend more than 10 minutes on it. I'm quite sure you can do a lot better than that, you should re-do it
And why put your name on the jersey so prominently?
And a tip: dark blue + dark red don't match really well often
EDIT: Another tip, make the writing white, it will be more clear in game.
Also, the writing 'Lierse - Pizza Ullo' is placed too high.
Another tip is that you should try to avoid writing on the jersey, if sponsor logo's are available.
PS: Not trying to offend you at all, just trying to help you!
Edited by fcancellara on 15-01-2013 22:59
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Jakstar22 |
Posted on 15-01-2013 23:01
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fcancellara wrote:
Mhm... I don't like it, I think you didn't spend more than 10 minutes on it. I'm quite sure you can do a lot better than that, you should re-do it
And why put your name on the jersey so prominently?
And a tip: dark blue + dark red don't match really well often
PS: Not trying to offend you at all, just trying to help you!
It was what Ollfardh was wanting. And he wanted the colors to look like the Barcelona shirt so that's what I did. I just did what he asked for. He said I could put my name on it so yeh.
Edit- what changes did you have in mind?
Edited by Jakstar22 on 15-01-2013 23:05
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miggi133 |
Posted on 15-01-2013 23:07
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fcancellara wrote:
Mhm... I don't like it, I think you didn't spend more than 10 minutes on it. I'm quite sure you can do a lot better than that, you should re-do it
And why put your name on the jersey so prominently?
And a tip: dark blue + dark red don't match really well often
EDIT: Another tip, make the writing white, it will be more clear in game.
Also, the writing 'Lierse - Pizza Ullo' is placed too high.
Another tip is that you should try to avoid writing on the jersey, if sponsor logo's are available.
PS: Not trying to offend you at all, just trying to help you!
Oh wow... Im sorry but I have to agree with fcancellara in every single point he makes (if ten minutes isnt too much already)...
Oh and might I add: If you think the coulours are rubbish, just use others. If you have a great design, no one will care. But it isnt enough to deliver a jersey like that, which clearly screams of no effort what so ever, just because it is excactley what the instructions said...
(Sorry if this offends you, but it has to be said)
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Jakstar22 |
Posted on 15-01-2013 23:12
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miggi133 wrote:
fcancellara wrote:
Mhm... I don't like it, I think you didn't spend more than 10 minutes on it. I'm quite sure you can do a lot better than that, you should re-do it
And why put your name on the jersey so prominently?
And a tip: dark blue + dark red don't match really well often
EDIT: Another tip, make the writing white, it will be more clear in game.
Also, the writing 'Lierse - Pizza Ullo' is placed too high.
Another tip is that you should try to avoid writing on the jersey, if sponsor logo's are available.
PS: Not trying to offend you at all, just trying to help you!
Oh wow... Im sorry but I have to agree with fcancellara in every single point he makes (if ten minutes isnt too much already)...
Oh and might I add: If you think the coulours are rubbish, just use others. If you have a great design, no one will care. But it isnt enough to deliver a jersey like that, which clearly screams of no effort what so ever, just because it is excactley what the instructions said...
(Sorry if this offends you, but it has to be said)
No it's okay. It has to be said so I can improve. Thanks for your feedback guys
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fcancellara |
Posted on 15-01-2013 23:29
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I made a logo you could use:
EDIT: Why not try yellow as the primary colour, with black as secondary colour? That are the Lierse colours, after all
Another tip: if a sponsor is not visible well because of the background colour, try to outline it
Edited by fcancellara on 15-01-2013 23:31
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Jakstar22 |
Posted on 15-01-2013 23:31
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fcancellara wrote:
I made a logo you could use:
That's so cool. I will definitely recreate that jersey
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Jakstar22 |
Posted on 16-01-2013 07:18
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Some more requests.
Vamosrafa
Giro
Tour
Vuelta
Miguel
Transfert AV
Transfert AR
I am now re-making the Lierse - Pizza Ullo jersey. Any suggestions on how to improve it?
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lluuiiggii |
Posted on 16-01-2013 07:31
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There's a double plis on the upper part of all shirts (you applied a plis on a shirt that already had a plis). And all but the TdF GC shirt are outdated (Giro green jersey doesn't exist anymore, and blue and red jersey in the Vuelta were last used in 2008 )
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Jakstar22 |
Posted on 16-01-2013 07:42
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lluuiiggii wrote:
There's a double plis on the upper part of all shirts (you applied a plis on a shirt that already had a plis). And all but the TdF GC shirt are outdated (Giro green jersey doesn't exist anymore, and blue and red jersey in the Vuelta were last used in 2008 )
Oh. Do you know were I can get the new jerseys?
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lluuiiggii |
Posted on 16-01-2013 07:45
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Most DBs/graphics thread/shirt DB.. where did you find those shirts?
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Jakstar22 |
Posted on 16-01-2013 07:46
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lluuiiggii wrote:
Most DBs/graphics thread/shirt DB.. where did you find those shirts?
The PCM11 files.
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lluuiiggii |
Posted on 16-01-2013 07:52
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Well, there's something messed up with the files in your PCM11. The Giro is then understandable, but not the Vuelta... these are the shirts that are in the "vanilla" version of PCM11:
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Jakstar22 |
Posted on 16-01-2013 07:53
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lluuiiggii wrote:
Well, there's something messed up with the files in your PCM11. The Giro is then understandable, but not the Vuelta... these are the shirts that are in the "vanilla" version of PCM11:
Thanks
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fcancellara |
Posted on 16-01-2013 15:15
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Curious what you will do
For tips, look in the posts above by miggi and me
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Jakstar22 |
Posted on 16-01-2013 19:54
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fcancellara wrote:
Curious what you will do
For tips, look in the posts above by miggi and me
Okay. Thanks for all your help guys
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Daggen |
Posted on 19-01-2013 16:08
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Can you make .gif avatars? If so I would like to have these pictures
Daggen
SMASH!!!!
I would like to have the red text in it as well.
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