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The Domestique | Chapter Two
the_hoyle
@jandal #1: Thanks a lot! You will find out the team soon Wink

@danny: The team will be carefully selected. My Martijn North story suffered due to poor team choices Smile

@sutty #1 & Will: Thanks a lot!

@sutty #2: Hincapie has bulked up in his retirement :lol:

@Mre: As the story suggests, there might not be as much glory and success as some other stories, but I think it has a unique twist. There is still going to be the excitement of the team in general taking glory, plus the occasional race where Jack is part of the breaks etc - think along the lines of Voigt for that sort of thing Wink

@jak: Thanks a lot!

@trek: I knew that I would get Aussie references wrong Wink I even had to double check that I could call it football :lol:

@Joe: Thanks so much Smile The joys of a graphics artist doing a story Wink

@jandal #2: Genesys Wealth was just the team for the back story Wink all will be revealed tonight though for the new season

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As jandal has already seen, the final part of the story set up is updated. All the reports from here will be 2014 onwards.
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trekbmc
Great work with the next part as well, I'm excited to see which team you'll end up at.

@trek: I knew that I would get Aussie references wrong Wink I even had to double check that I could call it football :lol:


Yeah, fair enough, I would get a lot of British or American ones wrong, just one mistake in the last one though (which is pretty good Wink) I went to race at one run by Caulfield - Carnegie on Saturday, it's Caulfield first (to be pedantic Wink)



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the_hoyle
@trek: It is Carnegie Caulfield on their website... Wink https://www.carneg...ng.com.au/
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the_hoyle
Getting Noticed
Chapter One
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As my life began down the Cyclist path, my brother Patrick had decided to practically become my manager. He was a few years older, and had some Managerial background from Work Experience, and his studies at College. Taking me under his wing as his first client was an easy choice for us both to be fair.

It was late one night when I got the call from Patrick. He had had a call from a team, who were looking at me joining them for the 2014 season. They had seen my racing from the last two season with Genesys, and had been impressed by my level of suffering for others.

We met for coffee the next day, and he talked more about the information he had. The team in question was American ProContinental team, UnitedHealthcare. The plan was simple really. I was to jet out to California, meet with the management team, and see how I fit in with everyone.


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Less than a week later, I was swapping Melbourne for Mt. Diablo in California. The initial meetings went well, and then it was time to hit the roads with some of the other riders. The Colombian climber Isaac Bolivar and veteran Lucas Euser joined me out on the road. It looked like they would be the main climbers for the team, and the bosses wanted to see how I gelled with him.

Don't get me wrong, the ride was good, but there seemed to be a strange atmosphere amongst us on the climbs. I felt like I was out of the conversation, and any attempts to get chatting was shot down and attention was brought back to the ride and focusing on training.

Flying back from the USA, I felt a little down hearted. I had hoped for more from the trip, but came back to Melbourne at square one. Luckily though, I landed to the news that not all hope was lost. It would seem that my services had been noticed, and I was hot property.

Edited by the_hoyle on 30-03-2015 18:21
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Scattershot Will
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Jakstar22
A great read. I hope he gets picked by a team that is right for him!
 
trekbmc
So he isn't with them? Great read anyway. Smile

the_hoyle wrote:
@trek: It is Carnegie Caulfield on their website... Wink https://www.carneg...ng.com.au/


Whoops, I'm sure that the jerseys said it the other way, but in the middle of a race it's hard to really remember. Pfft



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sutty68
UnitedHealthcare will be a Great choice Wink
 
the_hoyle
@will: you will find out later tonight when I have my next update

@jak: thanks a lot. The team will be a good choice and hopefully get his pro career off to a good start Wink

@trek: I'll let you off with the name. It is just 1-1 with the aussie reference errors Wink

@sutty: they would be but maybe not right at this moment in the story

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Just to add a special thank you to tsmoha, who provided me with graphics and db information from his NRS story. It means that we will have a much deeper Aus/NZ rider base in the game and will add more to the story
Edited by the_hoyle on 19-03-2015 17:50
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tsmoha
You're welcome Wink

Will follow with interest! Quality layout as always.

GBR project on hold then, btw?
 
the_hoyle
@tsmoha: thanks a lot. The layout was perfected in my Martijn North story and takes influence from IanButler and Admir when he was doing his story.

GBR project on hold until more information is released on some jerseys, more stages are created and also the 2015 PCM.daily Expansion Pack is released. The Expansion Pack will form the backbone of the db I do
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Ian Butler
Glad and honored to have been an influence Smile
Curious to see how this will unfold. No doubt you'll make it interesting, but the question is how Grin
 
the_hoyle
@Ian: Mre has highlighted that point with the interest value and I will admit that it will test my creativity in the writing. I can confirm now that the reports will just not be riding on the front before finishing low down the standings when the favourites attack. I see the rider being similar to Voigt so attacks and days in the break etc will happen as well Smile
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trekbmc
@trek: I'll let you off with the name. It is just 1-1 with the aussie reference errors Wink


Now I'll be searching for every mistake. Pfft



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the_hoyle
A Boy In Demand
Chapter One
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I got back from the States feeling jet-lagged, and not in the best of moods following the let down that was the ride with UnitedHealthcare. Don't get me wrong, the management and the team on a whole was fantastic, I was just left disappointed by the unfriendliness of Bolivar and Euser.

Thankfully, UnitedHealthcare were not the only ones interested in me for the 2014 season. I had a few messages from Patrick regarding some Domestic Teams who wanted to talk with me, an email from Raleigh-GAC in the UK and a text message from Nathan Earle of the rumours in Europe that I was being looked at by Tinkoff-Saxo.

I met up with my brother to run over what I had in front of me. Almost instantly, the offer from Raleigh-GAC was declined. I was ideally looking to take the next step in my young cycling career, and sadly a move to the UK Domestic scene was not going to do that. Also, with an link with Tinkoff being just rumours, I was not interested in that either.


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Next was to assess the Australian Domestic teams that had been in contact during my week in California. First was my current team, Huon Salmon-Genesys Wealth Advisers, who were changing to Avanti Racing for 2015. The team looked strong, adding more riders to the roster and I had the advantage of knowing the management team. However, I was unsure about whether I should look elsewhere to experience something different, plus they had stalled a lot on offering me a new deal until it felt like I was only wanted because other deals had fallen through on them.

This is where Drapac came in. They had been impressed with my work for Huon Salmon-Genesys on the domestic scene, and wanted to bring me across to bolster their domestique side of the team. They even mentioned some races where I had just pulled on a climb, and left most of their riders in the gutter. This in particular made a real impact on me, and tempted me in.

Without a moment's hesitation, I picked up the phone and called Jonathan Breekveldt. I was interested to know what they had to offer...

Edited by the_hoyle on 30-03-2015 18:22
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jandal7
I see two possibilities, and both deserve a banana (but the better one deserves two!)

He goes to Drapac - Banana
He stays at Avanti - BananaBanana

You have entered the banana scale already, with no racing.
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sutty68
I personally would choose Drapac Wink
 
the_hoyle
@Will: expect the unexpected - and he hasn't signed for them yet

@jandal: how many bananas will it be.. 1 or 2?

@Sutty: we will find out
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Jakstar22
Drapac is a great team!! I hope they offer you a good deal!!
 
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