Autumn Keselowski - The Beginnings
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TheManxMissile |
Posted on 18-04-2015 20:44
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Spoiler Firstly, this is not a copy of Mre's The Comeback. Second time i've said that but you should spot what i'm talking about quite quickly, but also easily spot why this is obviously very very different.
Again, like with the 3rd Karl Hammarling, it's not exactly a racing focused story. I like developing characters and worlds and will spend time in that side of the story without much PCM action. Unlike that 3rd Karl though there will be more standard PCM reports a bit of the way in, so stick around for those to begin.
Finally, don't expect a fast pace. Aiming for 2-3 updates per week as a peak. For me this story is just a nice extra on the side of other things that i will write as and when i'm in the mood. I've got some stuff stacked up and have planned about 90% of the entire thing. You'll also notice significant layout similarities between this and Karl, because i like it and it works. Anyway...
Name: Autumn Keselowski
Age (DoB): 15 (14/02/1994)
Nationality: USA
Place of Birth: Austin, Texas
Residence: Pflugerville, Texas
Specialization: Unknown
Catch Up On Demand
Chapter 1: The Beginnings
Spoiler I: Initial Exposure, Pt.1
I: Initial Exposure, Pt.2
II: Expansion of Interest, Pt.1
II: Expansion of Interest, Pt.2
III: Bitten By The Bug, Pt.1
III: Bitten By The Bug, Pt.2
IV: Infected, Pt.1
IV: Infected, Pt.2
V: A Love Affair, Pt.1
V: A Love Affiar, Pt.2
VI: Summer of '09, Pt.1
VI: Summer of '09, Pt.2
VII: Back to Reality, Pt.1
VII: Back to Reality, Pt.2
VIII: Day to day, Pt.1
VIII: Day to day, Pt.2
IX: Step Up, Pt.1
Edited by TheManxMissile on 10-06-2015 21:54
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Posted on 18-04-2015 20:44
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Edited by TheManxMissile on 18-04-2015 20:46
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Ian Butler |
Posted on 18-04-2015 20:46
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Good luck with this!
Wonder where this will take us |
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Posted on 18-04-2015 20:51
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAY! Wonder how this might go, should be interesting and fun to follow wherever you take it!
EDIT A: Is it women's racing?
EDIT B: Now you can be even more stealthy with links. When we talk about Lombardia: The [link]Autumn[/link] classic. Or a steam sale: [link]Autumn[/link] sale on now!
Edited by jandal7 on 18-04-2015 20:54
24/02/21 - kandesbunzler said “I don't drink famous people."
15/08/22 - SotD said "Your [jandal's] humour is overrated"
11/06/24 - knockout said "Winning is fine I guess. Truth be told this felt completely unimportant."
[ICL] Santos-Euskadi | [PT] Xero Racing
5x x5
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TheManxMissile |
Posted on 18-04-2015 21:32
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@Ian - As always i endeavour to surprise, so i wouldn't bother trying to guess where i will take this
@jandal - Yes it's Womens racing, if only i had a womens DB
I also want to say i'll try to up interaction with readers in this story, attempting to reply to each comment. That was something i wasn't the best at...
Edited by TheManxMissile on 18-04-2015 21:33
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Posted on 18-04-2015 23:00
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Best of luck TMM! You know I will be following
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sutty68 |
Posted on 18-04-2015 23:19
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If its as good as your last offering then we are in for a good time |
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TheManxMissile |
Posted on 19-04-2015 20:28
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@hoyle - Hope i can make it worth while for you
@sutty - Ideally it should be better but i'll take just as good, but this time with an award win
Chapter 1: The Beginnings
I: Initial Exposure, Pt.1
Fair to say Football was the dominant force in town almost all year round these days. If people weren't going nuts for the Panthers they were talking about the NFL, probably the Cowboys or Texans. Except the last couple of years when all that is supposed to be over Football comes in new forms as the NBC crews move in to do their filming. This kicks everyone off about it in the months that should be quiet.
I mean there are places to get away from it, and just hiding out at friends houses is enough once the main seasons are done for. As a result i'd spend most days at either Laura or Cassies house. Unlike my home they had pools which was a nessesity even in April as temperatures were already pushing the 80's. We'd relax in the sun and waste the hours with idle talk or with essay work or exam revision.
School would kick in the back half of the month and drag us back to the world. The NBC crews would still be around filming here and there but this was like the 4th or 5th year they were here so we were pretty used to it by now. This one day we supposed to be doing our Cross Country training in the stadium stands but where kicked out for Football filming. I cut out to go to Laura's for a break.
Her mum welcomed me in and told me she was out back. As I made my way through I was distracted by her father watching TV. Now that must sound strange but what caught my attention was what was on the TV. I'm so used to blanking out Football, or Baseball or Basketball or whatever sport it was, i'm just not that into them. But this, this was new and different.
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Posted on 19-04-2015 20:33
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You know, I already like this better than Karl. No offence, but it's very refreshing to see through the eyes of a girl in a story on this site
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Posted on 19-04-2015 20:55
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Ian Butler wrote:
You know, I already like this better than Karl. No offence, but it's very refreshing to see through the eyes of a girl in a story on this site
Good start!
100% agree with this. My thoughts pretty much exactly.
I understand most of the Yank talk but Fahrenheit just makes my head hurt I know the maths, something like celsius multiplied by something add 37?
24/02/21 - kandesbunzler said “I don't drink famous people."
15/08/22 - SotD said "Your [jandal's] humour is overrated"
11/06/24 - knockout said "Winning is fine I guess. Truth be told this felt completely unimportant."
[ICL] Santos-Euskadi | [PT] Xero Racing
5x x5
2x x2
2x x2
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TheManxMissile |
Posted on 19-04-2015 20:57
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@Ian - We'll see how it works out, because i am not female so might be way off
@Jandal - High 20's, in April!
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Posted on 19-04-2015 21:06
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Good luck TMM! Always great to read a story that start off with "this is not a copy of Mre's The Comeback." Can't wait to see where you go with it.
EDIT: Autumn has the same birthday (Valentine's Day) as Zooey...
Illuminati confirmed.
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Posted on 19-04-2015 21:28
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Good luck with this new story! |
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Posted on 20-04-2015 12:20
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We can all guess what was on the TV |
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TheManxMissile |
Posted on 20-04-2015 19:59
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@Mre - The birthday thing was a complete fluke, swear to god Otherwise it was copy&paste from Karl, even though there is almost no relation between Comeback and this
@DiCyc - Thanks
@Sutty - Idk, probably Ultimate Frisbee
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TheManxMissile |
Posted on 21-04-2015 15:51
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Chapter 1: The Beginnings
I: Initial Exposure, Pt.2
The camera peeled backwards showing off some rocky mountains and a group of people cycling up said mountains. This was just so alien! Yeah I could ride a bike but basically we'd just go to school or the shops or something and leave it at that. But these people were sweating and there was real exertion and effort going on. Honestly I had no idea what was going on as one rider would suddenly surge ahead and then be caught by the group.
Again and again it would happen. Eventually a figure in black would shoot ahead and almost like elastic snapping he was unleashed. The commentators were going nuts for it and kept up the high intensity chatter even though to my eyes nothing was happening. I must have zoned out watching for like 10 minutes when Laura jolted me back to the real world. The rest of the day was like any other spent by the pool doing school work. But I was ever so slightly elsewhere.
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Posted on 21-04-2015 17:31
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Girl interested in this. I want to marry her
This time I'm going try to keep up constantly and read everything. Was tougher to follow Karl because I fell behind every now and then.
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sutty68 |
Posted on 21-04-2015 23:42
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I remember getting paired up with a young lady called Amanda when i was on a club run (many many years ago) and she left me for dead |
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TheManxMissile |
Posted on 23-04-2015 15:42
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@Ian - She's 15! That's disgusting dude
@sutty - Just tell youself she was amazing and that you are only very good
Chapter 1: The Beginnings
II: Expansion of Interest, Pt.1
Later that night back home I looked up what that was on the TV. I knew it was cycling but beyond that I was at a loss. Didn't take to long to find out it was the Tour of the Gila, a race in New Mexico. From there I found out who the guys in black were that kept getting the commentators so excited: Chris Horner, Levi Leipheimer and Lance Armstrong.
Now I knew the name Lance Armstrong. It was hard not to! Lance was probably the biggest sports personality in the US that wasn't part of the big 4 sports, and even he eclipsed most of those. I also found links to a Womens version of the race with a Kristin Armstrong. Tuned out she wasn't related to Lance, they just had the same name by coincidence.
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Ian Butler |
Posted on 23-04-2015 15:58
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TheManxMissile wrote:
@Ian - She's 15! That's disgusting dude
Oh snap, had forgotten that
Never mind, then |
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