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Jakstar's 2013 Graphics - Closed!
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| the_hoyle |
Posted on 05-10-2013 00:42
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Looks good jak. Only criticism would be is that it looking a little plain on chest and sleeves on the front...
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| sutty68 |
Posted on 05-10-2013 01:33
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Agree with the_hoyle, the shirt needs a few more sponsors, otherwise it looks great  |
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| Gaffeff |
Posted on 05-10-2013 13:38
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I like it very much. Thanks for doing it. Love the rose. On the other comments on sponsors, I could see something on the arms. I personally think the chest is fine. One to add that would be easy to add is just the words in white "100% me". That's the slogan of the uk Ada and seems a good message on a development squad jersey. I think the national champions jersey will be very cool. Ta muchly. Very impressed.
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| Jakstar22 |
Posted on 05-10-2013 16:52
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Gaffeff wrote:
I like it very much. Thanks for doing it. Love the rose. On the other comments on sponsors, I could see something on the arms. I personally think the chest is fine. One to add that would be easy to add is just the words in white "100% me". That's the slogan of the uk Ada and seems a good message on a development squad jersey. I think the national champions jersey will be very cool. Ta muchly. Very impressed.
Thanks everyone. I will fix your jersey gaffeff and then I will get onto your NC.
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| GoRocheGo |
Posted on 08-10-2013 01:02
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Are my NCs and pack giving you any trouble? |
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| Terniz |
Posted on 08-10-2013 02:12
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Jakstar22 wrote:
Yorkshire Tea Cycling Team
Are the logos on the legs supposed to be like that?
It says TATA on the left leg and ATAT on the right. |
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| Masterblaster01 |
Posted on 08-10-2013 02:20
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Terniz wrote:
Jakstar22 wrote:
Yorkshire Tea Cycling Team
Are the logos on the legs supposed to be like that?
It says TATA on the left leg and ATAT on the right. Now you mention it.. You're right. The right one is mirrored insted of turned around.
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| Jakstar22 |
Posted on 08-10-2013 04:00
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I am working on all he remaining packs now.
And I will fix the jersey for gaffeff. I accidentally did that
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| Gaffeff |
Posted on 19-10-2013 20:32
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Graham Briggs would like to say thankyou. Maybe Australians are not useless at everything to do with Sport 
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Edited by Gaffeff on 19-10-2013 20:33
Arise, Sir Wiggo of Kilburn
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| Jakstar22 |
Posted on 20-10-2013 07:46
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Gaffeff wrote:
Graham Briggs would like to say thankyou. Maybe Australians are not useless at everything to do with Sport
Looks good Any chance you can give me an action shot of the side that the TATA is the right way up.
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| Gaffeff |
Posted on 28-10-2013 20:21
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Here you go, hows this?
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Arise, Sir Wiggo of Kilburn
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| Jakstar22 |
Posted on 30-10-2013 09:27
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Great thanks
Very sorry to all those waiting for jerseys and stuff. School and life is killing me right now
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| Jakstar22 |
Posted on 07-11-2013 05:50
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Hey guys. Sorry about not being active for a little while. I am going to keep this thread closed, but I will still make jerseys for myself and post them so I can get feedback.
I will try and finish equipment requests but I really don't think I can as I think it will not help with my current mood to continue graphics.
So sorry to the 2-3 people who still want their equipment. I did get through all the jerseys though (thanks heaps to MasterBlaster) so at least you still have that.
So anyway I have a new jersey for you guys.
Lavazza Cycling Team
Please give me some feedback and/or tips to improve this jersey. My first jersey in a month or so. I hope you like it.
I'd like to thank Krisa for helping me get back into making jerseys 
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| sutty68 |
Posted on 07-11-2013 09:42
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Liking the way you have incorperated the Castelli logo in the shirt |
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| Jakstar22 |
Posted on 07-11-2013 11:07
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Thanks sutty. I wasn't really sure how to put brown and red together. So I am really happy with the outcome.
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| FroomeDog99 |
Posted on 07-11-2013 21:15
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Getting better Jak, but there are still a few points that could be improved.
1. Some of the shapes still have pixelated edges. Try to do what you did with the non-pixelated ones with them.
2. The neck on the front and back are different colours, which will look bad in-game. Ideally they are the same. Same with the top and bottom of the arms.
3. The shorts are very plain. Some more shapes would make them look better.
4. You could use some sponsors more than once or twice on the jersey, for example Pinarello could go on the chest as well, which is very empty. Try to fill more space.
Other than them, a good effort. Like sutty, I like the way you used the Castelli logo on the back.
Edited by FroomeDog99 on 07-11-2013 21:20
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| Jakstar22 |
Posted on 07-11-2013 23:27
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Thanks Froome. I will get onto fixing that up today
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| krisa |
Posted on 08-11-2013 18:23
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Wow it's really nice, However you can still put some more logo's on the front of the jersey and put a little design on the shorts
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| Jakstar22 |
Posted on 08-11-2013 23:32
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I have done some design and logos on the chest. I will post it today hopefully.
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| Jakstar22 |
Posted on 21-11-2013 05:41
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Updated Lavazza jersey
Lavazza Cycling Team V2
Hope this is better
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