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| NTTHRASH |
Posted on 03-11-2013 14:47
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TheManxMissile wrote:
aidanvn13 wrote:
Well you can't say I didn't call it 
Spoiler aidanvn13 wrote:
In a dramatic twist of events Chloe announces that she is pregnant with Travis's child. He has no choice but to arrange a hit on her and secretly run away to Canada and give Spinning classes at a gym in Saskatchatoon.
Plot Twist 2: It's not Travis's. It's actually some other guys.... Actually the guy that hit Travis with his car all the way back. Zooey (sorry, Chloe  ) dumps him for the other guy, and they run away to Canada to give Boxercise classes at a gym in Manitoba
Plot Twist 3: Not Travis's kid shows up on a pro cycling team under Travis's direction, and Travis moves to Manitoba to take Boxercise classes and steals Chloe back.
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| aidanvn13 |
Posted on 03-11-2013 14:48
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TheManxMissile wrote:
aidanvn13 wrote:
Well you can't say I didn't call it
Spoiler aidanvn13 wrote:
In a dramatic twist of events Chloe announces that she is pregnant with Travis's child. He has no choice but to arrange a hit on her and secretly run away to Canada and give Spinning classes at a gym in Saskatchatoon.
Plot Twist 2: It's not Travis's. It's actually some other guys.... Actually the guy that hit Travis with his car all the way back. Zooey (sorry, Chloe ) dumps him for the other guy, and they run away to Canada to give Boxercise classes at a gym in Manitoba
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| TheManxMissile |
Posted on 03-11-2013 14:56
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NTTHRASH wrote:
TheManxMissile wrote:
aidanvn13 wrote:
Well you can't say I didn't call it
Spoiler aidanvn13 wrote:
In a dramatic twist of events Chloe announces that she is pregnant with Travis's child. He has no choice but to arrange a hit on her and secretly run away to Canada and give Spinning classes at a gym in Saskatchatoon.
Plot Twist 2: It's not Travis's. It's actually some other guys.... Actually the guy that hit Travis with his car all the way back. Zooey (sorry, Chloe ) dumps him for the other guy, and they run away to Canada to give Boxercise classes at a gym in Manitoba
Plot Twist 3: Not Travis's kid shows up on a pro cycling team under Travis's direction, and Travis moves to Manitoba to take Boxercise classes and steals Chloe back.
I can feel this getting rapidly out of hand....
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| 547984 |
Posted on 03-11-2013 15:35
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I think Travis deserves +1 Experience for that call.
baseballlover312, 06-03-14 : "Nuke Moscow...Don't worry Russia, we've got plenty of love to go around your cities"
Sarah Palin, 08-03-14 (CPAC, on Russian aggression) : "The only thing that stops a bad guy with a nuke is a good guy with a nuke"
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| welker3257 |
Posted on 03-11-2013 15:50
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I don't think that Travis is the most intelligent person in the world
Gig 'em Aggies
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| Miguel98 |
Posted on 03-11-2013 15:58
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He definetelly went balls deep on her.  |
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| Mresuperstar |
Posted on 03-11-2013 16:54
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I figure I should probably respond to these comments:  @aidanvn13: Yep, you predicted corectly. A  for you.
But now you have started a segment of horrible predictions...
@admirschleck: Thanks for the kind words. I'm more happy that I like writing this story a lot compared to possible winning the story of the year award. Every time I update I like seeing what your guy's reactions will be.
@Jesleyh: I wonder what happens next as well, because I haven't wrote it yet. I should probably get on that, or just leave you all on a cliffhanger.
@sutty68: I don't think Travis could handle triplets. But who knows?
@baseballlover312: It wasn't much of sex ed class in the little farm town of Kansas. But yeah, for our younger readers take precautions.
@TheManxMissile & @NTTHRASH: Stop writing the plot twists... that's my job.
@547984 & @welker3257: Intelligence/Stupidity is a fine line.
@Miguel98: Yes, that would be an accurate statement. 
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| Mresuperstar |
Posted on 03-11-2013 21:59
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In utter shock I hung up the phone on her.
What have I done? Don't answer that. I know what I did.
So yeah, I might have had a little more fun than I should
have had with Chloe after my Festival win.
But I didn't mean it to be a one-night stand.
This isn't good. What should I do?
Well, I could secretly run away to Canada and teach Spinning classes at a gym in... how about... Saskatchatoon. That's a remote place in Canada, right?
But that sounds a bit harsh, I still really like Chloe.
That's it, I have to head back to Kansas and make this right before it's too late.
As much as hate air travel, it's back on the plane. It's the right thing to do.
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| welker3257 |
Posted on 03-11-2013 22:02
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It is not Travis's destiny to become a cyclist, have fun paying child support
On the other hand, he could disappear during the Tour of Alberta 
Edited by welker3257 on 03-11-2013 22:02
Gig 'em Aggies
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| TheManxMissile |
Posted on 03-11-2013 22:09
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I would vote this as story of the year just for that part...
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| Ian Butler |
Posted on 03-11-2013 22:10
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Real sorry I missed a few updates, all caught up now.
This is a huge moment. Time to take responsibility. I rate parenthood over cycling, but that would end this story, so I vote for abortion
Story still going amazingly great. You've found a way to keep it fresh even though it's been going on for 37 pages. I think every story writer can only dream of achieving that keep going! |
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| sutty68 |
Posted on 04-11-2013 09:36
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Don't give up on Chloe or the baby  |
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| aidanvn13 |
Posted on 04-11-2013 09:44
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Who says it's Travis's baby
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| sutty68 |
Posted on 04-11-2013 09:47
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aidanvn13 wrote:
Who says it's Travis's baby
Thats a good point and another new twist |
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| Mresuperstar |
Posted on 04-11-2013 12:51
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In Amazing Race style I caught the first flight from LA to Kansas City.
And to my surprise, my flight went without a delay or plane troubles.
Perhaps my luck is finally changing for the better!
But, then again, I remember why I'm on the plane in the first place.
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By the time I got a taxi at the airport,
Chloe had finally answered my text message.
I'm glad she is at least willing to talk
this through after I had hung up on her.
Then again I have no clue what to say.
What could I possibly say to make this right?
Think fast Travis, the taxi is almost there.
I hardly know her and now she has my baby.
Should we keep it or have an abortion?
How can I be a supportive father as a cyclist?
Do I really love Chloe?
Does she feel the same way?
How do I make this work?
This is the biggest decision of my life,
and I thought leaving home was tough.
"This is the place, here you go sir. Have a nice night."
I has about to having anything but a nice night Mr. Taxi Driver.
Well... I can't stall any longer. It's not fair to keep her waiting.
*Knock Knock Knock*
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| TheManxMissile |
Posted on 04-11-2013 12:53
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Just call her Zooey, it'll be easier for everyone
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| Jesleyh |
Posted on 04-11-2013 13:02
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Damn, you really are a great story writer...
But no experience points, despite what he's going through?!
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| baseballlover312 |
Posted on 04-11-2013 13:05
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What? You don't even know where she lives? And yet she's having your baby. Just shaking my head slowly back and forth.
No abortion. This is on you Travis! And Chloe! You made the decision!
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| sutty68 |
Posted on 04-11-2013 13:56
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Why is she only there until 9pm |
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| aidanvn13 |
Posted on 04-11-2013 14:32
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1st Episode in the next series will be an announcement of a new sponsor for Travis...
And Travis thought his life was tough before. Gotta feel for the guy.
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