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| ivaneurope |
Posted on 28-09-2015 15:58
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Well, it's not the best thing around, but it's my first try. I present to you DataMap - Merida.
Background
Main Sponsor: DataMap is a Bulgarian publisher of maps for education in geography and history.
Secondary Sponsor: Merida
Other Sponsors: Shimano, Zipp and Odlo
More national jerseys will come up later - check this little teaser
Edited by ivaneurope on 28-09-2015 16:04
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| MARSUPILAMI |
Posted on 28-09-2015 16:04
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For a first try, it is very very good, congratulations!
Now what you have to do is try, try and keep trying to become a better shirtmaker  (not a lot of new shirtmakers do so... and that is a real shame...)
About the shirt you have posted...
I would put some logos in the bottom of the shorts, in both sides (Merida should work). Also, a pair of logos in the sleeves would be fine for the shirt (Shimano should work).
Anyway, I guess this is a Denmark NC, and I would like to see the main shirt!
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| ivaneurope |
Posted on 28-09-2015 16:06
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Main jersey is uploaded (I had troubles with the attachments) |
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Posted on 22-11-2024 21:26
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| MARSUPILAMI |
Posted on 28-09-2015 16:08
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Not quite bad!
One thing I would change is the placement of the main logos in the back. They should be much more down!
Also (I forgot to say it in the other post) I would put a logo in the ass (fi'zi:k should work)
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| ivaneurope |
Posted on 28-09-2015 16:28
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Thanks to the tips now I can see how big the difference is when you put more logos. I admit that the prototype was far from polished, but now the visual difference is huge
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| MARSUPILAMI |
Posted on 28-09-2015 16:31
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1.- The Shimano logos are too big (in sleeves). They should be 90-100 px
2.- Zipp and Shimano in shorts are upside down. 180º on both logos and it should work
3.- Ass logos are very good!
4.- Try putting Merida in the bottom of the shorts, in the front part
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| sutty68 |
Posted on 28-09-2015 16:48
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Looks OK for a first attempt |
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| MattHorse |
Posted on 28-09-2015 18:39
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Agree with Marsu, i noticed that you have bended the logos on the shoulders, that's very good
Also the idea for the national shirt is really nice.
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| ivaneurope |
Posted on 28-09-2015 20:45
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This was the whole idea for me since DataMap is a cartographic company and I wanted to make something different. That's how I came up with this unique NC maillots
I now introduce Australia NC using updated logos
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| Maddrengen |
Posted on 28-09-2015 21:08
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HAHAHA! Funny, on the Danish NC you're missing one little thing - it's this little island the Swedes didn't want called Bornholm  I get why it's not there when it's so far away from the rest of Denmark out in the Baltic Sea 
It's a funny NC style though, not anything I've seen before
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| ivaneurope |
Posted on 29-09-2015 11:44
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Now, these are only provisional and far from finished product, but since no one has made the jersey for the Team Dimension Data, I had to give it a try. One thing I need is HQ Qhubeka logo.
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| DiCyc |
Posted on 29-09-2015 12:36
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Nice work!  |
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| matt17br |
Posted on 29-09-2015 12:42
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Isn't this HQ?
Spoiler https://dnwssx4l7gl7s.cloudfront.net/bicycle/default/page/-/Blog/July-Sept%202013/logo-2-e1372662471860.jpg
Very nice work for a first attempt!
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| ivaneurope |
Posted on 29-09-2015 13:08
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The black couldn't be removed and so I had to retain it in the jersey. Samsung logos on both legs on the bottoms.
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| lollo345 |
Posted on 29-09-2015 14:03
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Can you create maillot of national champion of Team Dimension Data?
Norvegia
Irlanda
ERITREA
Sorry for my bad English
Forza contador
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| ivaneurope |
Posted on 29-09-2015 14:51
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lollo345 wrote:
Can you create maillot of national champion of Team Dimension Data?
Norvegia
Irlanda
ERITREA
Sorry for my bad English
Of course I'll do these, but first I've got to tune the main shirt |
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| MARSUPILAMI |
Posted on 29-09-2015 15:08
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It is not bad, but still (take this as constructive critic, your work is good, but with these tips it could get better and better):
1.- The Cervélo logos in the sleeves are way too big. They should be like 60 px or so
2.- The Deloitte and Qhubeka logos in the front don't match very well... I would use those sponsors for the sides of shirt and shorts (f.e. Deloitte for shirt, Qhubeka for shorts) (and would delete everything in the front except Dimension Data but
3.- The Dimension Data in the front is pretty strange. This thing is pretty important! The chest should not be empty. And my tip is... At least use two logos there, one for the bike supplier (In this case, Cervélo) and another one for the clothing supplier (you can use Castelli, Sportful, Craft...). It is a small effort, but it makes sense and the shirt gets a bit better Also, and talking about Dimension Data logo, I would delete the logos and only keep "Dimension Data" there, maybe a bit down.
4.- Have you tested the shirt ingame? I mean, I don't remember a shirt in which the logos in the ass are bended like that... I don't know...
5.- Cervélo logo in the back will be covered by the dossards. I would delete it, or at least add it in the top of the back
6.- At last but not least, I would put the Dimension Data in the back in the same way you have put the one in the front, but a bit down
Sorry if this is too much, and as I said, take this as a constructive critic to improve your work
No more to say
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| ivaneurope |
Posted on 29-09-2015 16:06
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Don't know about this - did I used too much green?
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| MARSUPILAMI |
Posted on 29-09-2015 16:21
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Green is good, but I still don't like how you worked the front and the back part of the shirt 
Look at this. This is more realistic. I would like you to edit your shirt and try to get it like this:
After you get the logos right, we can start discussing about the design, because it is way too simple
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| ivaneurope |
Posted on 29-09-2015 16:44
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The front seems too dull.
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