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| baseballlover312 |
Posted on 30-11-2013 00:10
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Mresuperstar wrote:
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I don't understand the drama in this?
You mean I finally pulled one over on you? Read between the lines, it's the end of the season there was to be some drama. Or it's false drama. All will be revealed in the next episode. Which should be up tomorrow morning. Even though I already have it written up. I like to keep you all waiting. 
No, I don't think it's bad writing, I just don't see what the Jakstar was really meaning with "it could go either way" Chloe's just making a toast...
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| The Hobbit |
Posted on 30-11-2013 08:58
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Really, maybe it's all a disguise. He rips off a mask, and it's Chloe's father, who promptly rips out a sub machine gun and kills everyone in the room, except himself, so he jumps out the window, only to fall through the window of a perfectly timed jet fighter which whisks him away to Spain, but this time with a Travis mask on...
Ok, maybe a bit outlandish, but some of the people on this forum can make drama out of anything. Not always a good thing, but in this case it most certainly is.
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| Mresuperstar |
Posted on 30-11-2013 12:49
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"First, I would like to say thank you to everyone
for sharing this special day with Travis and I.
It's been a hectic couple of months for the two of us.
And while I only meet and got to know Travis over this past year,
it's still been the best year of my life.
They say, love is what you’ve been through with somebody.
And well Travis and I have been through a lot already.
So, Travis. I finally figured out what love truly is and it was because of you.
Thank you. I'm so grateful this all worked out and we are raising Zooey together.
It's a dream come true.
But, that wasn't the reason I wanted to make this toast..."
Spoiler
"I'm pregnant again. Zooey is going to be a big sister."
How is that even possible?!? Oh, yeah. I almost forgot,
we may have got a little crazy after my first pro stage win.
I guess it wasn't too soon for her to get pregnant again. Whoops.
In the dead silence, Chloe's dad sarcastically yells across the crowd.
"I want my wedding gift back, it's too late. It was a box of condoms."
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| Jakstar22 |
Posted on 30-11-2013 12:53
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Was the spoiler legit or just fake. If it was then 2 pregnancies in a year. Haha
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| Mresuperstar |
Posted on 30-11-2013 12:59
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Jakstar22 wrote:
Was the spoiler legit or just fake. If it was then 2 pregnancies in a year.
It's legit, why else would it be there? If you do the math it's still plausible that she got pregnant twice in one year. And as we already found out Travis doesn't have much self-control in the bedroom. 
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| Jakstar22 |
Posted on 30-11-2013 13:01
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Mresuperstar wrote:
[quote]Jakstar22 wrote:
Was the spoiler legit or just fake. If it was then 2 pregnancies in a year.
It's legit, why else would it be there? If you do the math it's still plausible that she got pregnant twice in one year. And as we already found out Travis doesn't have much self-control in the bedroom. [/quote
Haha. True. Travis needs to work on that.
But I guess she can can't she. Well her comes kid 2
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| baseballlover312 |
Posted on 30-11-2013 14:27
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Keep your dick in your fricking pants Travis for God's sake I mean really! Again?
Well, they have to take care of two infants now, since the other one is basically a newborn still. I have to admit I'm kind of rooting against them at this point. I'm team Chloe's Dad.
Edited by baseballlover312 on 30-11-2013 14:29
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| The Hobbit |
Posted on 30-11-2013 15:17
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Does Chloe have a mum as well? Or is she just not that vocal. Tbh, I preferred my plot twist, but it'd be hard to know what you'd do from there, you know, with everyone dead...
Actually, I sort of agree with Baseball (me, agreeing with someone, I hear you say), I'm finding it quite hard to like Travis as much, but no one's perfect i guess. Good luck with a landmark season 10.
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| Mresuperstar |
Posted on 30-11-2013 15:34
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@baseballlover312: If you were in his shoes, it would be kinda of hard... I mean... come on.
(Viewer Discretion is Advised) 
@The Hobbit: She does, and yeah her dad is just more vocal. And go ahead choose sides, as long as you keep reading I'm happy. 
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| Alakagom |
Posted on 30-11-2013 15:36
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I may be the only one ( doubt it ), but this story for me represents huge crash of MreSuperstar on Zooey Deschanel
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Greatly written though, very enjoyable. Superb
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| baseballlover312 |
Posted on 30-11-2013 15:37
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Then she's got to get on the pill! I mean, they're fricking married, so they can screw around however much as they want, but they're a pretty fricking fertile pair, so unless they want 10 kids they better get with the program.
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| Mresuperstar |
Posted on 30-11-2013 15:44
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@Alakagom: No, why would you say that?
@baseballlover312: Noted, but how was I going to continue the story after Travis' retired? See, I'm thinking ahead not just making drama for drama sake. Cross your fingers for a boy.
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| Miguel98 |
Posted on 30-11-2013 15:50
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Again pregnant? And crazy? Must have been a very interesting night. 
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| Ian Butler |
Posted on 30-11-2013 16:24
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Hmm, an unexpected turn. Let's wait and see how this pans out. I vote Rosemary's Baby.
Oh - and don't forget. 2 kids. She ain't gonna look like that anymore, that's not realistic
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| TheManxMissile |
Posted on 30-11-2013 18:00
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That's a fake (yes it's obvious but so what if i say so)... Season 9 probably my least favorite season so far, or the best... Honestly cannot tell at the moment... Gonna re-read it all later on once i've got over the emotions brought on by my own writing...
On the plus side, Dad seems to have accepted things nicely. Wonder how the second child will impact on Travis and his decision making. Gonna need a lot more money, and can he leave Zooey to deal with both of them as much as he has done so far?
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| jseadog1 |
Posted on 30-11-2013 18:25
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Its going to be a boy and the real story is him growing up and becoming a better cyclist than Travis
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| Mresuperstar |
Posted on 30-11-2013 18:38
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@All: Season 10 is going to be slow moving because I have uni exam week coming up in two weeks and if you read the new Weekly News (#101) you would see I have another project planned for December.
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| Matthew21rp |
Posted on 30-11-2013 18:56
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| sutty68 |
Posted on 30-11-2013 20:41
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Baby number two is under construction
How long before they have there own team
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| Mresuperstar |
Posted on 04-12-2013 03:58
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Two pregnancies in one year. Truly remarkable.
But just like the first pregnancy,
it was our fault we got ourselves into this mess.
Again, we would need to take responsibility for our actions.
It's safe to stay that we made this mistake one to many times.
And I'm pretty sure we won't let it happen again (unless we plan it).
However, both families actually took the baby news quite well.
I guess after they saw how we were raising Zooey together that
all their fears of us being together and having a baby were irrelevant.
They even started suggesting baby names.
I guess... well, I wish my readers were more like my new relatives.
They know we made another mistake but they also understand
that we are capable of making the best out of this. Life goes on.
We have already proved that we are strong enough to
face the consequences of our actions so we can do it again.
So, the only thing left do now is to come up with baby names.
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