My first shirt, any tips ? [KLM-Dashboard]
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Jape |
Posted on 20-03-2008 22:55
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Made my very first shirt today, sponsors: KLM - Dashboard.
Besides the obvious that the Dashboard text on the trousers don't match up plus the fact the screenshots still show the Rabobank cold weather outfit, has anyone got any pointers to improve this one. Im satisfied for a first try but i have the feeling im missing something and/or it could be improved.
Heck, i added a poll too, wanna know what u all think (me amateur )
Now that im looking at the in-game shots, a better line up on the shoulders for the back and front part plus some sponsor or logo on there too would probaby make it a bit better, right
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SportingNonsense |
Posted on 20-03-2008 23:01
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Its a great jersey for your first attempt.
The main noticeable thing to me is that the logos on the sides of the shorts dont match up, It would be better to have just the 1 'Dashboard' on each side, not 2 right next to each other
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Posted on 20-03-2008 23:05
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Ah yes,thx for the tip, that's a better fix then my idea, wich was trying to line them up correctly. Unfortunatly the back of the shirt under the KLM logo is stretched too i see now, should be round not oval |
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Posted on 23-12-2024 23:34
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CrueTrue |
Posted on 21-03-2008 12:02
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I like it a lot. I'm no jersey specialist, though, so I can't come up with any good suggestions.
I hope you still spend time programming, though |
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Smoothie |
Posted on 21-03-2008 12:16
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A tip from me would be that you should try to match up the red parts so it flows from front to back. Good first try though |
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Jape |
Posted on 21-03-2008 21:06
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CrueTrue wrote:I hope you still spend time programming, though
, you've been talking to someone lol, but yes i am, needed some time off though so i thought i'd give a custom jersey a shot
Thx for the tip Smoothie, i will update this shirt asap, and maybe make my own team with it |
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CrueTrue |
Posted on 21-03-2008 21:15
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I haven't been talking to anyone - but I know you've made several programs for previous editions of PCM, so why not for this one too? |
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Jape |
Posted on 21-03-2008 21:41
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i see, well i've been PMing with Aabern about a new tool i'm making so i assumed you talked to him . The reason i haven't been building any tools yet for PCM07 was simply cause i had no converters for it, but Hannes has given me his DLL for converting so i'm back in business now thanks to him |
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CrueTrue |
Posted on 21-03-2008 22:24
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Haven't been talking with Aab-ern about it
Anyway, that sounds great. I'd love to hear more about it - but that's for another thread, not this one |
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Crommy |
Posted on 21-03-2008 22:33
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Very nice - kind of pus most first attempts to shame (ok, all of my attempts, which look like a 4 year old has got hold of the crayons)
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Jape |
Posted on 25-03-2008 20:26
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hehe, thx crommy.
@Crue: will do so asap, but first wanna work a little closer to a final product, so i can focus solely on that , i'd say between 1 and 2 weeks and i'll be close enough. |
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