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The Comeback
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| sutty68 |
Posted on 05-11-2013 12:58
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Very wise words from Travis indeed, i hope Chloe decides to go with him  |
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| Atlantius |
Posted on 05-11-2013 13:07
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They can by a mobile-home and then she and the baby can follow him around where he races.
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| sutty68 |
Posted on 05-11-2013 13:15
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Atlantius wrote:
They can by a mobile-home and then she and the baby can follow him around where he races.
Just like Cavendish and his bitch  |
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| Mresuperstar |
Posted on 06-11-2013 00:43
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As you can image, my parents were distraught about the baby news.
Yet, my mother was a tiny bit happy that she was going to be a grandmother.
"Travis, I thought this day would never come. No offence."
Well, thanks mom. My dad was in one of his stroke induced moods and
was struggling to comprehend the information I was saying.
Although he did look a lot better since I last saw him a month ago
before I had left to take part in the Amgen Tour of California.
And at least neither of them pointed a shotgun at me, so that's a plus.
I would have stayed in Kansas longer but
I had I training camp with Bissell the following day.
(I thought the UCI had banned in-season training camps
because it gave cyclists some sort of unfair advantage.
Hmm, so maybe we are just having a mandatory team meeting.)
That wasn't the question rolling around in my head. It was:
Is Chloe going to be at the airport?
That seems like a good place to stop.
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Wait, you want more?
Well since this is the first episode of season 7...
Why not make it a special longer episode!
When I got to the airport, Chloe wasn't there.
You're the one that wanted more... my life isn't some fairy-tale.
I waited, and waited, and waited, and waited. And waited some more.
"Final boarding call for flight 326, Kansas City to Los Angeles."
She couldn't do it, or more likely, her dad didn't let her do it.
I gave it my best shot, what more could I have said?
My luck, or better said now, my fate had struck again.
There is no way Chloe is having that baby now that I'm leaving.
So I guess we will never know what could have been.
I'm not an emotional guy, but...
Bzzzz Bzzzz Bzzzz Bzzzz
My phone, I was getting a text message!
But wouldn't Chloe call me if she was running late?
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| 547984 |
Posted on 06-11-2013 00:54
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Can't wait for the next episode.
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| jseadog1 |
Posted on 06-11-2013 01:35
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Things are getting intense now 
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| Jakstar22 |
Posted on 06-11-2013 05:10
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This is my new favourite drama show keep them coming. Just caught up and I WANT MORE!!!!!!!
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| sutty68 |
Posted on 06-11-2013 08:39
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That last instalment was very well written indeed 
Got a feeling that Chloe is at the airport waiting for him though |
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| Ian Butler |
Posted on 06-11-2013 09:36
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Spam on the story of an admin?
I'm not an emotional guy, but...
Bzzzz Bzzzz Bzzzz Bzzzz
I thought he was falling asleep there.
Anyway, a nicely written piece, wonder how it'll pan out! |
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| Mresuperstar |
Posted on 06-11-2013 13:05
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@547984: Great to hear. Will be up in a few minutes. However it will probably be my only one for today. Need to get some school work done.
@jseadog1: I think I have built up the tension to the max by now. 
@Jakstar22: Okay, okay, calm down. I know how you feel, I just can't write them fast enough at the moment. Even though I have been doing 2-3 updates per day now.
@sutty68: I actually struggled a lot to write this one, so I'm glad it's quality still matches with my other updates. It was a bit different but I like the way it came out looking back at it now.
@Ian Butler: SPAM, where!?!? I thought I got all of it before I went to bed last night, I guess not. Thanks to the other admin that picked up whatever was left. Funny that it attacked my story, they don't know who they're messing with. 
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| Mresuperstar |
Posted on 06-11-2013 13:14
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[IMG-r]https://i1080.photobucket.com/albums/j335/mresuperstar2/The%20Comeback/Season%207/Ep2/1_zps6cd545ef.jpg[/IMG-r]Are you kidding me? It was only Kyle.
I guess you could say
my future was messaging me.
I handed my ticket over to the
lady working the gate.
Down the ramp and into the plane.
Everyone was waiting on me. But,
then a guy at the back of the plane stood up.
"Hey that's Travis Newton, I saw you on TV."
Next thing I know I'm swarmed by
people asking for autograph.
It's the first time anybody
ever wanted my autograph.
I was honored but at the same time
couldn't stop thinking about Chloe.
I'm fairly certain that I signed Chloe's name
on a few of them by mistake.
"Folks can you please sit back down, we are already late as it is.
Wait, hold on... the pilot has just informed me there is one more
passenger that just made it to the gate. You may continue standing."
No way! Could it be?
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| Jesleyh |
Posted on 06-11-2013 13:27
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I feel sorry for the people having a 'Chloe' autograph though
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| sutty68 |
Posted on 06-11-2013 14:30
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Nice to know that Kyle is already getting recognised for autographs
Chloe really left it late as well  |
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| The Hobbit |
Posted on 06-11-2013 14:45
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sutty68 wrote:
Nice to know that Kyle is already getting recognised for autographs
Chloe really left it late as well
Kyle? You mean Travis right...
Also, what do we call the baby, I'm calling George/Wesley if boy. Zoe if girl |
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| Jesleyh |
Posted on 06-11-2013 14:54
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Hmm, Wesley sounds good for a boy
Or something else with a W... Hmm... What about Wilco?
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| Mresuperstar |
Posted on 06-11-2013 15:05
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@The Hobbit: While that's still a ways a way (January/February 2014) and anything can happen, thanks for starting the baby name talk. I'd love to hear what you guys can come up with. I have a list of about 5 names for each gender. When the time comes I'm doing a random generator for gender and out of the names I like. So, if I like your suggestion I'll throw it into the mix.
Zoe is 100% in the running Not sure about George, maybe Wesley.
@Jesleyh: No Wilco.
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| The Hobbit |
Posted on 06-11-2013 15:07
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Someone had to start it |
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| TheManxMissile |
Posted on 06-11-2013 15:12
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If it's a girl the name is Zooey, no choice...
Also, whens the next race?
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| Mresuperstar |
Posted on 06-11-2013 15:20
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The Hobbit: Glad you did. Was something I almost forgot about.
TheManxMissile: Yeah Zooey/Zoe is the obvious choice for a girl but we will see when the time comes. And the next race is coming up soon.
I promise.
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| Ian Butler |
Posted on 06-11-2013 16:01
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Firstly: it's another great update. Writing is very good.
But if I may, a small point of criticism: the text next to the picture gets cut off too much and doesn't read that smoothly. Just a minor point, still a great episode |
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