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Diadora Pro Cycling | Ending story
baggieboys32
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Posted on 24-05-2013 14:58
If im entirely honest, Your story does indeed lack some things. I would suggest starting again with a real name DB, it's only a minor thing but makes such a difference. As well as this try to incorporate more screenshots as big blocks of text can easily put off readers/followers.

The final thing I would suggest is getting a graphics artist to make you a kit, at the moment the jersey you ride in does nothing to engross the reader, as it just re-imbeds the knowledge that this is but a game. The best story writers can almost convince readers that what happens in there story could be real life, and things like good graphics are very important for this.

Never the less, It is always nice to see another story, and I have been reading along when i get a few spare minutes. Keep trying and i'm sure you'll finish up with a great quality read Smile




 
kqyt
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Posted on 24-05-2013 16:03
.I'll se if I make a new story with a correct DB and stop on this. Well, I skipped posting LBL, but Gilbert won in front of Valverde and Anton
Diadora Cyling
A new era in Italian cycling?
 
kqyt
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Posted on 25-05-2013 05:22
Now I have pretty much decided too make a new rider story with a correct DB. I will make polls of him and how he will be, so no more races from Diadora will be posted on forum.
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A new era in Italian cycling?
 
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