The Comeback
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547984 |
Posted on 29-12-2013 18:02
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Travis rejects numerous women.
baseballlover312, 06-03-14 : "Nuke Moscow...Don't worry Russia, we've got plenty of love to go around your cities"
Sarah Palin, 08-03-14 (CPAC, on Russian aggression) : "The only thing that stops a bad guy with a nuke is a good guy with a nuke"
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Mresuperstar |
Posted on 29-12-2013 18:33
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I took Kyle's advice and hit the streets of Los Angeles.
I didn't know what else to do. I had come so far just to lose it all.
I wandered the streets, local bars, and strip joints looking for answers.
It didn't help. Again, I was just wasting my time. And your time.
Where do I want my story to go? I'm 12 Seasons in and I still don't know.
I could have been the underdog farm boy that overcame the odds,
the amateur that got hit by car and still fought his way to the top, or even
the guy that made horrible relationship decisions and still made the best of it.
I'm I still that guy? That guy that went nameless for 2 seasons
because I was afraid to be 100% open with my readers... I don't know.
Maybe I should just get an office job and call it quits.
That's what you all seem to want anyways.
I'm completely lost. Not just in mind, but in the city of Los Angeles.
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547984 |
Posted on 29-12-2013 18:47
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You can go be an actor you know, and star alongside Zooey....
baseballlover312, 06-03-14 : "Nuke Moscow...Don't worry Russia, we've got plenty of love to go around your cities"
Sarah Palin, 08-03-14 (CPAC, on Russian aggression) : "The only thing that stops a bad guy with a nuke is a good guy with a nuke"
Big thanks to jdog for making this AMAZING userbar!
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TheManxMissile |
Posted on 29-12-2013 19:14
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Treating this story like i do a series on Netflix... wait for the season to be uploaded in full, then crack it all out in one sitting...
Right, (500) Days of Summer is awesome film and you used the ideas extremely effectively. Some nice in jokes and stuff. I guess how it can be confusing to people who havn't seen the film, and if not you really should.
The content of the season... You've put me in a tricky position now totally by accident. I am also spooked by how similar our minds our. I might explain it via PM rather than here.
Some good writing, if a tad predictable at times. Still all well executed and stuff. Basically the normal positive comment etc etc
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Posted on 22-11-2024 12:59
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Ian Butler |
Posted on 29-12-2013 19:48
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I thought you were breaking the fourth wall there (12 seasons...) but then I remembered it's actually "Travis" writing this.
Curious about this season. |
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Mresuperstar |
Posted on 30-12-2013 14:19
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Bzz...Bzz...Bzz... Where I'm I?
Wait, is that my phone? Yep. It's Kyle. "Hey, what's up?"
"Where are you? It's 11AM. Get back here and take care of your kid."
"Sorry I passed out, I don't know where I'm at. I'll be home in a little bit."
"Alright, hurry up. Your kid is driving crazy. He won't stop crying.
Also, I got an interesting email you might want to see."
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"Damn man, you look terrible."
"Thanks... I guess. Where is Joseph? And what's this email all about?"
"I finally got Sir Cries-A-Lot to take a nap so he should be good for a while.
Oh, and that email. Check this out. Are you up for it?"
Encino Velodrome - Road to Rio
The Encino Velodrome is proud to announce we will be holding the
West Districts for the United States Omnium event. The top 2 finalist will advance to New York where the will compete to make the Olympic roster to compete in 2016 Rio Games. Tickets will be sold at the door for $10 on June 18. Hope to see you there.
"Kyle I thought I was banned from cycling?"
"I found a loophole, they banned you from road race cycling. Not track."
"Well, I guess it's worth a shot then. I got nothing to lose. One question,
how are you going to get me a spot in Districts? I haven't raced track in years."
"Don't worry. I'll pull some strings and work my magic. I can handle it."
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tsmoha |
Posted on 30-12-2013 14:27
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Nice! Tbh, i was already hoping for Travis to come back to Track at some point so that could be a good thing imo!
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Miguel98 |
Posted on 30-12-2013 14:32
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He will still do it!!! |
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sutty68 |
Posted on 30-12-2013 15:39
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The track could be his saviour |
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547984 |
Posted on 30-12-2013 17:46
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OMG some actual use of PCM now.
baseballlover312, 06-03-14 : "Nuke Moscow...Don't worry Russia, we've got plenty of love to go around your cities"
Sarah Palin, 08-03-14 (CPAC, on Russian aggression) : "The only thing that stops a bad guy with a nuke is a good guy with a nuke"
Big thanks to jdog for making this AMAZING userbar!
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The Hobbit |
Posted on 30-12-2013 18:08
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Sort of don't want him to win, sort of do, just to be safe, Go Travis!!!...
Nice, although I hope ur better at track than me, or he'd be doomed! |
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baia |
Posted on 30-12-2013 18:15
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Nice move..
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Jakstar22 |
Posted on 30-12-2013 22:09
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He will win come on Trav
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Shonak |
Posted on 31-12-2013 02:16
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Track Cycling is a nice change and might re-focus Travis a bit again, might even bring him back to his roots, which may be the best thing to happen to him in a while.
"It’s a little bit scary when Contador attacks." - Tommy V
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Mresuperstar |
Posted on 31-12-2013 12:14
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"Grab your track stuff, let's go."
"Kyle is your calendar messed up, districts are in two days."
"Not for you. Your journey start today.
I may have told you a slight lie when I said I got you a spot in districts."
"What's going on? Come on man don't be messing with me it's 7AM."
"Seriously get up. I could only maneuver you into a qualifying spot for districts.
Which means you have to win a 16-rider sprint tournament to make the omnium.
"You could have at least told me you prick."
"I didn't tell you because you would have freaked out.
You are a lot better at track when you don't think about it so much.
Okay, you know what, I'll get your stuff and Joseph. Just make yourself a coffee."
I had been crashing at Kyle's place for almost 3 months now
so I really had no ground to argue on. I got up, Kyle returned moments later.
"Really man... Chloe's jersey? Way too soon, that hurts.
Get my Discover jersey."
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"Good morning and welcome to the Encino Velodrome!
Our 1st sprint match of day is between Travis Newton & Jesse Barker.
The first round is best out of 3, after that it's best out of 5.
Winner of the tournament claims the final spot in our districts omnium event.
Riders on your marks. Get Set!" Bang!
The gun goes off, no mistakes. I at least have to make it out of the 1st round.
Spoiler
That was close. I lost the first heat but fought back to win the last 2.
After sitting around watching the other 1st round match-ups,
I can tell you this isn't going to be easy.
Difficulty: Normal (Hard - Nationals) (Extreme - Olympics)
Rider Stats: Everyone has even stats placed at 5.
Edited by Mresuperstar on 31-12-2013 14:05
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Jakstar22 |
Posted on 31-12-2013 12:19
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First round gone COME ON TRAVIS. YOU CAN DO IT!!!!!!!
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Ian Butler |
Posted on 31-12-2013 12:21
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Like the return to track |
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The Hobbit |
Posted on 31-12-2013 13:15
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Did he just tell Joseph to make himself Cofee, what....
Isn't he a bit young
I'll get your stuff and Joseph make yourself a Cofee |
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baia |
Posted on 31-12-2013 13:27
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Good start..
Why does it wonders you Hobbit? my kids make coffee too, even when its imaginary..
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Mresuperstar |
Posted on 31-12-2013 14:07
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The Hobbit wrote:
Did he just tell Joseph to make himself Cofee, what....
Isn't he a bit young
I'll get your stuff and Joseph make yourself a Cofee
Fixed. I tried starting the next sentence before I finished the other one.
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