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Twenty Four // 0700
TheManxMissile
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Ok, small side project here. Lasnik continues as normal (when PCM behaves itself again... grrr). As you have probably seen i try out a few different ideas here in the story section. This one is very different. Without rambling on or bringing the tone down; i'm currently going through some stuff (nice and vague) and a recommendation has been to expand my creative writing. Taking that on board i decided to move forward with this idea. It's been in my head for a few weeks and i've done some prior work on it.
Not quite sure how the timing of updates is going to work, probably infrequent (or all within a short period... it'll make sense i promise), really depends on how Uni work builds.
And now i'm rambling... Pfft




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Dippofix
Uhhh, exciting! Smile

On a side note: I guess this means the World Series of Cycling is dead?
 
TheManxMissile
Ermmm, WSC is a tricky one. It's not "dead" but it's currently not running... nor will that Beta continue (i think). That's a really long term project because of the amount of stages and other stuff i have to make/do first. I don't really have that much time for it, maybe 3-4hours a week and if the Editor crashes (which is fairly often) i just lose all motivation to keep going. It will return, but probably not until 2014 at best...

And yes, get excited for this Pfft
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547984
You made me waste a minute of my life. Pfft
baseballlover312, 06-03-14 : "Nuke Moscow...Don't worry Russia, we've got plenty of love to go around your cities"
Sarah Palin, 08-03-14 (CPAC, on Russian aggression) : "The only thing that stops a bad guy with a nuke is a good guy with a nuke"

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TheManxMissile
So a bit more information. Twenty Four (as you might have guessed) will detail 24hrs. Just one day, but the whole day.
It is based off some PCM aspects, but is going to be mostly fantasy/story/whatever.
I will give specifics later on, but it's a fantasy near-future situation. Still close enough to have some of the current stars, but equally new names as well.
Expect twists, turns and a truly unleashed creative TMM!
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547984
Cycling races take hours!

Not in PCM time though Pfft
baseballlover312, 06-03-14 : "Nuke Moscow...Don't worry Russia, we've got plenty of love to go around your cities"
Sarah Palin, 08-03-14 (CPAC, on Russian aggression) : "The only thing that stops a bad guy with a nuke is a good guy with a nuke"

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TheManxMissile
The People


The Journalist
"Journo" is a late 20's man. This is his first time reporting on a Tour de France, but has always had an interest in pro cycling. He is spending the night on the slopes as part of a future feature/vlog thing.
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The Fan
Dedicated as always. The early-20's male has spent the whole month tacking the great race. The adventure is set to conclude on the final sections of the finish, right in the heart of the die-hards.
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The DS
Worn out having been working almost non-stop for a whole month. The experienced veteran has just one day to get through now. Commanding the troops is his key focus, but the success needs one final push.
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The Rider
Glory is but a pedal stroke away. Three tortuous weeks lead up to one final effort. The chance is there for the taking if the energy is to be found. Youthful enthusiasm and talent have been deadly.
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Ian Butler
Seems good. Though I hope you don't forget about Tom Wink
 
Jesleyh
I'm curious Wink
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sutty68
This certainly sounds like it is going to be one to remember, Good Luck with it :lol:
 
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TheManxMissile
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@Ian - Having some issues with Tom... It takes me between 5 and 10 minutes to load a 3D stage. And if, at any stage during this loading, i click or press a button, it crashes PCM and i have to restart all over again. Once i'm in the race it's fine, minus the normal PCM annoyances. And as a result it's hard to find the motivation to do multiple stages in a day. I could do one stage every couple of days, but that's too slow for me... I could quick sim, but it doesn't slide into the style of story.
He's not forgotten, just slow at the moment while i try some other things and have a run of coursework deadlines creeping up.

@Jesl - Good

@Sutty - It will never be forgotten! And the lol smiley?


12:00 - 12:59 // Sunday 22nd July 2017 // The Journalist


- "Cheers for the win Patrice! Have a good evening... And to you too."
Scott Reynolds stumbled out of the tent. He had been dropped alone on the side of a mountain with the intention of making some cutting edge first person journalism. This was Scotts first time at a Tour de France, and the production team decided there was no better way to experience it than in amongst the fans. Which is why several hours ago his broadcasting buddies kicked him out the Citroen and headed for a hotel down in Bedoin.

The Best of Provence was covered in die-hard cycling fans. For the first time since 1975 the race was not finishing on the Champs-Elysees. No, as part of the "New Tour" this race finish was atop the Mont Ventoux. The fabled mountain was about to add yet another great chapter to its history. Thousands upon thousands of people had plagued the mountain sides to secure their spots for the final action of a jaw-dropping race.

Scott had pitched his tent and wandered off to film the fans doing whatever it was the fans did. He had just spent a happy couple of hours with Patrice and his family. Just 5 people lost in the masses on the gradients. It was all very lovely, but it wouldn't make for good telly. So Scott headed off to find something more interesting. On one of the switchbacks below were a set of strobeing lights. The tree line being punctuated by fantastical colors; oranges, reds, blues and yellows illuminated the night air.

It was the Dutch, of course. Someone had set up a makeshift bar/nightclub just under the edge of the trees. It had been swamped by the orange of the Dutch fans. Drunk was being kind to them.
Camera in had, Scott dived into the dancing, drinking fray. Their man Velduizen had sealed the Green Jersey the day before in Marseille, and they were celebrating hard. The GC was a bust but beer put that thought well away. In amongst the Dutch Scott could pick out various other supporters, mostly Gap-year types happily getting more and more drunk. The race wouldn't reach these slopes until 3pm at the earliest, plenty of time to calm a hangover.

The mountain was buzzing. The movement of the thousands giving the impression that the land itself was moving, readying itself for the assault of the riders later that day. One fan was setting up for a totally different kind of assault.


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Edited by TheManxMissile on 05-11-2013 14:48
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Jesleyh
I liked that part.
Just one thing: Velduizen is a rubbish Dutch name Pfft
Veldhuizen would be better. And what do you mean the GC was a bust? What happened to Kelderman? Doing Giro-Vuelta double? Pfft

No really, well-written, curious what happens next Wink
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TheManxMissile
@Jesl - I have a Dutch friend, his name is Veldhuizen Pfft And Wilco... ermmm.... drugs bust in 2015, yeah that will do!
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Jesleyh
Grrr... Grin
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SSJ2Luigi
Jesleyh wrote:
I liked that part.
Just one thing: Velduizen is a rubbish Dutch name Pfft
Veldhuizen would be better. And what do you mean the GC was a bust? What happened to Kelderman?

dude, who cares about Kelderman when there is something to drink on Banana

sometimes I wonder if you are a real dutchman but then I remember that you're a minor Pfft
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TheManxMissile
01:00 - 01:59 // Sunday 22nd July 2017 // The Fan


The stars grew and grew before popping in an explosion of white light. The tree tops shook and twisted. The pavement rushed upwards at an alarming rate.

Chris hit the deck hard. The left hook had caught him both squarely and by surprise. The tarmac road was still warm from the summer sun and i almost welcomed him down. Before Chris could move a second blow connected with his temple and he was pitched into darkness.

By the time Chris came to things had gone to sh*t. The incident with the Slovak had gotten out of control, and a full on brawl was breaking out on the slopes. The Slovak, his mates and adjoining camp of Serbs were at war with the Germans Chris had been drinking with. Probably one hundred men were scraping away, most for now reason beyond the fact they were drunk and tired.

Chris took in the scene from his position on the flaw, before slinking away up the rocks away from danger. Perched atop an outcropping of limestone he watch as both sides went for it. Nothing was overly vicious, and a lot of it was just a good natured wrestle between blokes. Chris was joined by a few other campers, then a few more and a few more. Soon there were hundreds pushing and shoving for space to watch the chaos!

It took only a moment for things to spread. Perhaps someone pushed too hard, or one of the fighters spilled into the gathered masses. Before anyone knew better the scrap had spread. And on it flowed, outwards, upwards, right across the side of mountain. Exhaustion, heat, drink... the mix of it all, along with the already bubbling anticipation of the days action, and only a slight spark was needed.


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sutty68
It sounds like one Hell of a riot Pfft
 
TheManxMissile
02:00 - 02:59 // Sunday 22nd July 2017 // The Fan


It was not the first time unrest has hit a Tour mountain. In fact it's more regular than the organizers and police would care to admit. The huge numbers of people, the atmosphere, the alcohol... It only seems to be a matter of time.

The old arguments fueled the fighting. It had descended to a basic national level. Every fan was defending their favorite home riders. The insults flew, as did a lot of rocks, bricks, bottles, anything that wasn't secure was hurled about. Tents were knocked down, and the occupants then joined the ever growing riot.

Obviously not everyone was involved, and Chris found refuge with a group of people a bit higher the climb. From their vantage point they were some of the first to notice the red and blue flashes down in on the plains. Word had gotten out to the local police who were responding as swiftly as possible. A couple of helicopters cast spotlights onto parts of the mountain. But this intervention only spurred on the anarchy. The in-fighting stopped, and attentions turned to the police. Europeans had an ever decreasing relationship with the police following the failed recovery in 2014. Bottles, poles, rocks, shoes all headed skywards in a vague attempt to hit the choppers.

Down in the woods Chris could make out flashes of fire. He assumed that a stove of something had just been knocked over, and hoped it wasn't anything more serious. The smoke drifting up above the trees cast yet more darkness into the night. The flickers of flame licked menacingly at the trees. The smell of the burning had an immediate impact down below. In amongst the trees there was a clear change in noise and attitude. The combined efforts were simply on putting out any fires before they spread. On the bare slopes above though things continued, violently.


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TheManxMissile
03:00 - 03:59 // Come on, you know the date by now


The bright colors of the makeshift clubs and bars was rapidly being outshone by the every gathering glare of red and blue from the various emergency services gathering on the Ventoux. The fighting and riots still continued, but in decreasing and sparse pockets now. The Fire Department was well in control of the small fires in the woods, while the Police had taken back significant control of the upper slopes. Various Ambulances were also dotted around, tending to the injured.

Down below two headlights pierced the dark streets of Malaucene. The Skoda wound it's way through a couple of small backstreets, clearly avoiding the main roads. After a few minutes it pulled up outside Aux Tournesols hotel outside of the main town. The kitchen door swung open and a hunched figure slipped soundlessly into the passenger seat. Away the Skoda pulled, cutting South onto the road towards Carpentras and beyond.

The car and its two occupants sped down the deserted road. Behind them the Beast loomed large, emitting eerie glows because of the concentrations of flashing lights. It was still far too early for any commuting traffic, or even for anything Tour associated.

The car charged into Avignon 40 minutes later. Having again ducked down some alleyways the Skoda came to rest beside the Hotel Mistral. The reception light was still on, illuminating a tall, skinny silhouette. The suited man strolled outside, and sat down in the rear of the car. Not a word was spoken as it pulled away once more, and set off South again towards Aix-en-Provence.


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TheManxMissile
04:00 - 04:59 // Same Date // The DS


*bbrrrrring bbrrrring*
*bbrrrrring bbrrrring*
*bbrrrrring bbrr*
"Hello?" ... "Really !?" ... "Ok" ... "Yep" ... "I understand" ... "So the race is still on as planned?" ... "Thanks for the update"

The phone call was just one of many that was sent out. Mikel might not have been happy to have been disturbed, but the information obviously could not be ignored. The Ventoux had erupted in violence that night. Many fans had been injured in the fighting, and areas heavily damaged. Some parts of the forest had even caught fire!

The call came from the race organizers. It was simply updating the DS on the events. The police had taken complete control of the mountain now and the unrest was stamped out. The firefighters had extinguished all the fires, and the medics tended to most of the injured.

It seemed a far cry from the hotel in Aix-en-Provence. The night air was totally quiet, save for the occasional car on the street. Mikel had made sure his riders had gone to bed a long time ago, but he roused himself to double check anyway. This was the hidden side of his job. He often found himself in these situations, almost acting like a parent to the squad.

A fairly quick scout around confirmed that all the riders were where they should have been. Mikel softly stole back into his room and drifted back into sleep. His final thoughts turned a bit strange. He could have sworn there was something not quite right in one of the rooms... It could wait a few more hours.

The streets were quiet. The whole town was silent with anticipation. The morning would bring the final start of the Tour. It was as if the town itself was storing up the energy to celebrate the event. Another set of headlights cruised down the streets. It was a Skoda, and it was heading north.


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