The story of Aram Mukhtari Ryborg: America is Waiting
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Tamijo |
Posted on 15-06-2017 19:56
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Disclaimer: Some actual location or name of persons will only be used, to create a story of pure fiction. This is played with the lowest potential on extreme, so don’t expect a superhuman.
Edited by Tamijo on 10-08-2017 14:01
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Tamijo |
Posted on 15-06-2017 20:05
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21/8 2022 Hvidovre Kirke, Hvidovre Kirkeplads 3, 2650 Hvidovre, Denmark
The Preacher : When someone dies young, we are shocked, scared and angered at the unfairness and senselessness that took him from us. Unfortunately, there are no easy answers, and as difficult and painful as it is, we must accept that Aram Mukhtari Ryborg is dead. As a family, as friends, as a community, we express our sadness, we acknowledge our loss, acknowledge the great importance of his life, and the loss to us.... John was not crying, not much anyway.
John, was rushing out after the service to get a cigarette, he sees Layla and gives her a wordless hug, thinking: Hell..I never thought it would end like this, I thought for sure that I would be the one to go first.
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Ian Butler |
Posted on 15-06-2017 20:28
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that opening
Awesome, dude. Just awesome. I'm hooked |
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Kiserlovski01 |
Posted on 15-06-2017 20:31
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Nice to see you finally taking your plan to action. Great start, I'll be following.
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AbhishekLFC |
Posted on 16-06-2017 05:13
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Great start Tamijo
The Single Rider story you've been planning for so long!
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Raziz |
Posted on 16-06-2017 09:44
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Tamijo wrote:
Disclaimer: Some actual location or name of persons will only be used, to create a story of pure fiction. This is played with the lowest potential on extreme, so don’t expect a superhuman.
Hey, I like the notion of not being injury prone ya know. |
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Tamijo |
Posted on 16-06-2017 10:55
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Raziz wrote:
Hey, I like the notion of not being injury prone ya know.
This is beyond my English language understanding
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DiCyc |
Posted on 16-06-2017 11:07
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That was something of a start. Good luck, man!
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Tamijo |
Posted on 16-06-2017 11:27
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Thanks to everyone, hope You all will like what is to come.
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Tamijo |
Posted on 16-06-2017 11:27
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Thanks to everyone, hope You all will like what is to come.
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jandal7 |
Posted on 16-06-2017 11:39
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Interesting, very interesting Best of luck Tamijo
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Jakstar22 |
Posted on 16-06-2017 12:52
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What an amazing opener!! Great start mate!! Looking forward to the next update!
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Croatia14 |
Posted on 16-06-2017 13:03
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wait what? I love the story developement these days, Tamijo with another promising start!
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sutty68 |
Posted on 16-06-2017 14:53
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Sad from the start, does that mean that is going to get sadder........... |
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Kiserlovski01 |
Posted on 16-06-2017 15:12
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Tamijo wrote:
Raziz wrote:
Hey, I like the notion of not being injury prone ya know.
This is beyond my English language understanding
In English: he did like the idea of not being injury prone but you said the main character won't be a superhuman.
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Posted on 16-06-2017 15:33
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This looks quite interesting already, looks quite bizarre already. I'll make sure to follow how this develops
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Tamijo |
Posted on 16-06-2017 18:56
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Thanks again to everyone.
sutty68 wrote:
Sad from the start, does that mean that is going to get sadder...........
I hope not all the time
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Tamijo |
Posted on 16-06-2017 19:05
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April 1976, Ferdowsi (12 District) , Tehrān
Jaleh Mukhtari got her first and only son, just before she turned 19, on an unusual hot April morning. All the women of the family were gathered around her. Even though her husband could afford a hospital, she had chosen to give birth at her parents’ house.
Her father was a professor at the University of Tehran, she loved him very much. He had taught her many things, expecially languages English, Arabic and even some Russian, even though Iran was becomming very western not many of her female friends knew any of that.
She took her mothers hand, draw her closer and whispered in a very fragile tired voice: “Mother I am so happy, will you call in father and Hamid, before I fall asleep”
Jaleh with a girlfriend on her 18th birthday, one of the few pictures she got out of Iran.
Edited by Tamijo on 16-06-2017 19:15
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DiCyc |
Posted on 16-06-2017 19:10
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It sounds really interesting, right now
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sutty68 |
Posted on 17-06-2017 00:41
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Hmmmm Iran, i wonder where this could be going |
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