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First shirt. Looking for feedback
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| Mulopeza |
Posted on 28-07-2015 22:33
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Hey! I haven't been around here for a few years and I'd like to get back into PCM with the 2015 version.
I'll change my topic title and this first post if I make more shirts, to show them off. For now I'm just looking for feedback on my first shirt.
The shirt is for a "custom" team (based on an esports team with their actual sponsors). I haven't given a lot of attention to sponsor placement yet, so I assume I'll get some feedback on those. Please let me know what you think :
Before feedback:
Update after first feedback + minijersey :
I still need to take a look at the program to create minijerseys and I'll update with an ingame screenshot later.
Thank you for the feedback 
Edited by Mulopeza on 29-07-2015 08:39
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| valverde321 |
Posted on 28-07-2015 22:40
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Pretty good for your first jersey.
The HTC sponsors on the side could maybe use some adjusting, (recolor or something, it looks a little off with the way the jersey design is) but other than that very good.
And the bum looks a little empty of any sponsor.
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| coolrex |
Posted on 29-07-2015 05:13
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Nice jersey for your first one.
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| mattie524 |
Posted on 29-07-2015 06:54
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Nice jersey for a first one! Not a jersey maker myself but maybe a Nike or other sponsor logo on the bum could go nice! Up to you. Nice job though!
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| Jakstar22 |
Posted on 29-07-2015 06:56
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Nice design but a bit empty of sponsors. and as Valverde said the htc logo is a bit weird.
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| Maddrengen |
Posted on 29-07-2015 07:42
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valverde321 wrote:
Pretty good for your first jersey.
The HTC sponsors on the side could maybe use some adjusting, (recolor or something, it looks a little off with the way the jersey design is) but other than that very good.
And the bum looks a little empty of any sponsor. Yes nice shirt. Without having lokked at it in the viewer the overlapping looks fine, Regarding the HTC logo, I'd make a 1 or 2 px-wide white stroke around it. And I'm missing the Cloud9 logo on the back, aswell as something on the sides of the pants.
Very nice work indeed 
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Posted on 24-11-2024 06:39
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| Mulopeza |
Posted on 29-07-2015 08:42
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Thanks for the feedback already. I've done some changes to the shirt.
I agree that the HTC logo was off. I tried the white border that was suggested, but I still didn't like it and could not find a good solution. I got rid of HTC as a sponsor as I don't think their logo will look nice anywhere else on the shirt.
I added some more sponsors. It's still a bit empty but already a good improvement.
Update after first feedback + minijersey :
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| MARSUPILAMI |
Posted on 29-07-2015 09:53
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Looks good, congrats
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